SwanBrown's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Haydarpaşa]

very nicely Drawn.
I'm of Two minds on this. On the one hand, it's clear that you are heavily invested in your technique. Your strokes are telling of expertise with a split-tip.
The down-side is, that's the only story they told me clearly.

One thing that would serve you very well, is learning how to ease things in, and out of motion. I'm inspired to mention that, by your beautifully illustrated boat's sudden stop that instantly turned it from a thing with stature, and mass, into a drawing of a boat.

ayhanima responds:

thanks Swan Brown.

[Quick Thoughts: Drawing D]

I think that's probabbly accurate.

[Conservation of Mass]

happy effect.

I enjoyed this. Not really sure why, but I definitely enjoyed it.

Not the most elaborate animation around here, and it wasn't super insanely detailed with all sorts of superfluous effects. It does what it does simply, and effectively.
good job!

Sanbles responds:

Thank You!

[Astronave]

Thanks for the laugh!

Bit of a long set-up for a 2 beat joke, but still very funny.

I think the narration could use more volume, and possibly some faint background music.

Stampini responds:

Thanks for the feedback. You're right, it's an exceptionally long exposition; I'm surprised that folk have the stamina for it! The setup is partly for the gag and partly to introduce the series.

Thanks for pointing out the volume issue; I'll look into it.

Roberto

[Leina, Diamond Hunter!]

Enjoyable on many levels!

I thought the art was wonderful, and the comic timing was spot-on! The music and sound effects really made this for me. They fit so well with the rest. And the Fighting cat part had me in stiches!

[Pills]

if it weren't for...

I liked it, but there seems to be some audio clipping going on, and it kindof ruins the ride. for me.

Greenskullkid responds:

ur right

[Lament for a Toy Factory]

holy crap!

That's incredible! I especially liked the part where the old-timey music with break-beat comes in...actually there are ALOT of parts in this that I especially like.

in my opinion, anything less than 3/5 is proof of idiocy.

[Simple clock simulation]

Shorry, Mishter, I broke yer clock.

okay, now THAT's pretty cool!
I was having a great time playing with the gears.

The I tried moving them. OOps! I managed to get it limping along again, but I had clearly violated it's precision design. A reset button would be cool, or a way to reset just one part to it's default.

Also, while I'm asking for crap I know little about, Some tick-tock sounds would be cool!